Forum:Character Help

A random idea of mine, if you feel lie you're lost on your characters, their to Mary-suish, etc.

Random Character
Belongs To:

Why I Need Help:

How do You See This Character? Any Suggestions?
I think that bla bla bla, and taht to fix the bad qualities of who they are you should bla bla bla. -Other user.

Michael Johnson
Belongs To: Herman the Vision

Why I Need Help: He feels a little flat and hard to write...I'd liek to know how others see his chaarcter and wrk off of that.