Talk:Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas:My Neighbour's Dog Turns Mean

There's a couple of grammer points, but I didn't want to edit directly onto it. It looks good, but maybe you could put some more background information in it? (Type of dog, past experiences of dog, description of neighbour's garden, more info about Steven).

I'm definitely not trying to be rude, I think it's amazing! I hope this is constructive criticism. Artemisgirl 20:01, March 20, 2011 (UTC)