User blog comment:Techne/My Love for Percy, or, Why a Nearly 20-year-old Loves PJO, Yet Hates Twilight/@comment-2055812-20100629113502

@Zaffie: What I especially dislike about Meyer's style is that she overuses adjectives and adverbs. Yeah, we get it, Edward's supposed to be hot and the most beautiful being in the entire planet (not...), there's no need to describe his looks all the time!

But really, no amount of good writing could have saved that story, the plot is so clice...

Mind if I ask what kind of a story you are going to get published?