Talk:Maiden of Magic

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Hey PiperMcLean. I'ver read your story and here are my comments and rate:

So first thing is I was lost who your main character was, you could've introduced her in a way for us to know Tori more and the rest of the Gang, and you could have put Percy and Annabeth's characteristics more like from the book. And that try to make simple and understandable to the readers. Be careful on your spelling and grammars (I tend to overlook those, don't copy me! :D) And lastly, even though it had a few downers I still think your story is great. I rate it 6 out of 10. Don't worry I know you'll be better next time.

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 11:14, January 25, 2011 (UTC)