User blog:Guywithafedora/My second Prophecy

This is the prophecy for my Bane of Olympus story. I would like all of your opinions on it.

The Phantom rises up to take Olympus's throne,

To be challenged by the messenger, star, and child of her own.

Campers overcome themselves at Camp Half-Blood's gate,

'While hero and villain meet an intertwined fate. '

 Guywithafedora: The Voice of Reason, Master of Words, and He  Who Likes Cats (talk) 19:30, July 12, 2012 (UTC)