Talk:My Story Begins Ch 2

I just have two small grammer points (it's really just me being a perfectionist). Third last paragraph, should be "Maybe a bit too much confidence as I continued to hit him..."

Last sentence should be, “Ok big boy, your fight's with me now.” (Short for "fight is with me")

Hope this is constructive criticism, and it doesn't come across as me being rude. I think it's amazing.Artemisgirl 20:39, March 20, 2011 (UTC)