User blog comment:Sibuna4evs/Reaching your breaking point/@comment-6068707-20130629024354

Interesting, although the last line is unneeded. It could work in an actual story. I als would like to know who is Menoitios, and what exactly are Mists. But if you ever decide to make this a story, I would love to read more. It starts off with an interesting twist. I actually though you were writing this for real. I can't describe how intriuged I am with this. :)