User blog comment:Dagostino/The Dago Reviews/@comment-3146930-20111027035051/@comment-3337043-20111027051334

Haha, thats okay. The main problem I found while reading your story (ireread the whole thing, by the way) was:


 * 1) You mixed up homophones, like Luke and look, for example.
 * 2) There were a couple run on sentences and places where you needed a comma
 * 3) Lastly, there were some things that were misspelled.

Overall, I think you should get a beta, because all these things are hardly noticeable details that would take a lot of time to scan the chapters and fix.