Talk:Finding Paradise/@comment-5636540-20130403130328

This looks really interesting! I like it! I can't wait to read the actual story! The plot is out there, descriptive and simple but also full of mysterious things, making you think "I wonder what will happen." The exact kind of thing a reader wants- I like how you make it seem so dark but balanced at the same time in the light. (Most of my points like those never make sense to my authors.) all in all well done so far and being generous I give you 3.5 stars seeing as the story has not been developed yet. Good start though I can't wait to read it!