Talk:Away with the Birds/@comment-3389778-20130403071634

(Almost forgot to review this chapter too) Anyway, the pacing of the chapter was too fast for my liking. Everything happened so fast and there wasn't enough time for things to set in.

Also another thing is that why is Heracles name Heracules in here? I thought it was a typo but it seems to have been repeated several times so it seems like it was intentional.