Talk:The Questers: Wanted

Nice job so far, except one thing i find unrealistic is that pretty much Zack takes down the entire team, and you said they were less expierenced then The Questers but that is untrue, most of them have been around since the beginning of The Questers, and plus Cal wouldn't go down that easily, in fact you mostly make it so he doesn't even put up a fight, but he can do some pretty crazy sh*t when Stella is in trouble, including moving so fast he seems like he is teleporting, and has had A LOT of expierence, actually a lot more than zack, and plus thats kind of going god mode right there, and plus a lot of the members of The Heroes Organization could take some of the members of The Questers, save The Maruader. Zack and possibly Natalie, they can fight and are extremely good at what they do, hence they are members of olympus and are called The Heroes Organization. And I could reasonally argue that most of them have their own special abilities that would help them stop them. Thus I find it very unrealistic they would go down as fast as they did. I know that it is for the most part of your story and you can do what you want but if you must allow them to be defeated that fast atleast make Stella have dissapeared(she was teleported against her will somewhere, probably Olympus or the Camp). Sincerely, The Others 03:16, November 26, 2010 (UTC)