Talk:Blade of the Scolopendra/@comment-3237912-20130325222913

Oh, this is good. Really nice. It has a nice start. (I don't remember Argus talking in the books, though.) It would be good if you seperate the paragraphs full of dialogues in lines, so it doesn't look clustered, and looks a bit professional. Chapter two's ending hooked me. Continue, and keep up the good work! :D