Talk:The Heroes Organization: Incipient/@comment-1452857-20130708183556

I like the whole premise of the story. It's very interesting and written so that I want to find out more.

I can't say I love the story because there were a few things I didn't like. The pacing is pretty fast and certain parts can be confusing. I never became attached to most of the characters; maybe it was their personalities.

Despite the cons I will look out for this story. I want to see how it ends and how everything plays out.