Book 1:the deep woods

ok this is as good as it gets. Maybe. Probably not.

Chapter 1
It was the first week of August. One week till my 12th birthday. Me and all my friends were going surfing. I was just riding along when I saw him. He had jet black hair and deep green eyes. Next to him stood a girl with blonde hair and startiling grey eyes just like Eliza. It sort of creeped me out that a stanger looked almost exactly like Eliza and the boy had dark green eyes just like me. I fell of my board. Nicholas laughed. I got out and pushed him off his board."You think its funny NOW?" I asked. He spit out sea water."Never do that again." " Don't laugh at me! Anyway look at thoes people over there the boy with the black hair and the girl with grey eyes." We went to shore.