Talk:Order and Chaos/@comment-1452857-20130327214308

Archie, this story is amazing! The originality, the characters, everything is awesome!

Although I do have some CC. You describe Lionel's appearance many times, and it can get a tad excessive, so you may want to cut that down a bit. There were a few typo/grammatical errors, but those were rare.

Despite that, I love the characters (especially Allen, and Lionel is starting to grow on me -- I am even curious about Aaron's whole backstory), and I will definitely be looking out for this story.

You are an awesome, writer, Archie! I'll be sure to read your other series too!