Talk:Kira Valdez/@comment-26038114-20150124070010

This is a pretty great OC, I like all the detail. But it might be better if you added some detail as to WHY Esperenza Valdez gave Kira up, because Esperenza isn't the type of uncaring mother that would do that just because she like Leo better or something. Maybe you could add the reason she gave Kira up was she didn't have enough money to raise two kids, and didn't was Kira to starve. It doesn't have to be that reason, but an explination would be really nice. Other than that, great job!

Also, is it just me, or does this look a LOT like Kira?