Talk:The One Who See's: The Amazon Queen

Hi! It's a great story, with a good use of descriptive language and variation between the different chapters.It could maybe be improved by saying more about how the characters fel, but to be honest there really wasn't anything I could find to complain about, it was a really great story.

Rochelle Daughter of Thalassa (talk) 23:19, December 27, 2012 (UTC)Rochelle Daughter of Thalassa