Talk:Chapter 1 - Skylar

Hello Unregistered User :) Great story so far and I can't wait to read more! However, some suggestions, one, it would be helpful for you and other users if you Log in, or if you do not have an account then to create one!  We are all very friendly here and if you need any help with anything you can always leave me a message on my talk page, or the talk page of our Admins SallyPerson, Kakki10, Leafwhisker or even anybody else on this wiki, however these people are generally the most knowledgeable about most wiki related stuff!  Also, another good tip to make your story an easier read is to make any new character speech a new paragraph.  Other than that very good.

Have a great day and have fun editing! --MattShadow - Species:[Immortal] 02:10, June 7, 2011 (UTC)