User blog comment:Leengard Ustan/New Here/@comment-1452857-20130110221904/@comment-4728047-20130111022552

yeah, I understand that it isn't the number of characters in the story, I'm mostly just in need of opinion's on the one's I currently have like how to improve them (which I would probably then find a way to work into the story if possible) as some of them aren't exactly complete