Last Breath (Wiki Contest: July 2013)

About
This story is about two Demi-Gods, Jamie and Daniel. They're ages are very far apart, but they have almost a brother and sister relationship. Daniel saved Jamie from death and Jamie has saved Daniel from Death also, but lately something very strange has been going on with Jamie. She hasn't been talking to Daniel or spending time with him, and he wants to know what's going on.

But Daniel's Fatal Flaw is getting in the way of him trying to figure out what's wrong with Jamie, everytime someone asks him to do something he has to obey. But Jamie's Fatal Flaw is getting in the way of her trying to tell Daniel what's wrong. She's to loyal to her friends, and would do anything for them.

Will Daniel and Jamie's friendship be restored or will these two friends break apart forever? Only time will tell if these two Demi-Gods are meant to be friends. ..

Chapter 1
~WIP~