User talk:Darkcloud1111

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Percy Jackson Fanfiction Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the Nolan Swift: Fastest Hero Alive page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Kakki10 (Talk) 22:51, February 9, 2011

Your story
Yeah! It's really great and is definitely on the right track. Keep it up! I can't wait to see how it turns out.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  01:16, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your story is great! I absolutely love it.  SallyPerson /   Natalie Cole  02:06, February 10, 2011 (UTC)



Luna Silver: Daughter of Artemis -- Update.
Hi. I updated my Fan Fic. If you have time. Please have a read. Thanks !

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 11:34, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Link: Luna Silver: Daughter of Artemis

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 11:34, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nolan Swift: Fastest Hero Alive
Nice story (honestly and really), feel bad for Megan, and write who's point of view, and yes I'm writing this in a hurry.

Moodle "You have poured so many memories into me. Given me so much... That I feel like I'm about to overflow. Look at me Roxas, who do you see?" - Xion speaking to Roxas, Kingdom Hearts 358/2 days 20:11, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey!
You're here again! Read my 50 Ways to Annoy Ares "story".

Moodle "You have poured so many memories into me. Given me so much... That I feel like I'm about to overflow. Look at me Roxas, who do you see?" - Xion speaking to Roxas, Kingdom Hearts 358/2 days 21:35, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your Story
Ah-mah-zing :D

LOL. I'm on syllables today. Anyways. that was great. two bad Malcolm and Erika might die or something.

Anyhow, tell me when you update, 'kay?

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 12:04, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

P.S ~ Have you read my story ? Can I have your feedback ?

LOL. No wonder -- thanks for the info. I'll refrain from using Tab. Thanks :D

I'll be updating soon.

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 02:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Your story
Wow. I'm amazed. Grammatically, it seems as if everything is in order. That's always a plus. Also, most importantly, it's amazingly creative! You manage to fit in a lot of action without it being unrealistic. Also, all your ideas are your own and they're great! I wish I had thought of them. Haha. Wow. I love it.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  15:00, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. I love the ending. I can't wait to see another story from you! I hope an idea comes to you soon!  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  22:57, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. Those both sound great.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  01:09, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Great job so far.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  01:16, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Chu can choose from Naomi, Karena, and Demetra :3 Dafnne Daughter   of Poseidon  01:19, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

K. Can't wait~! Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  01:50, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Nice job. It's great. I love how you pulled in Arachne. I don't think I've seen any other story with her in it. Anyway, amazing!  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  16:18, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, thank chu for using my character XDDD It's amazing how chu can keep turning out the chapters so fast :3 Dafnne Daughter   of Poseidon  18:29, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Dude, if I could do that, I wouldn't have any unfinished stories right now XDD You've really got talent, you know. Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  18:38, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey can you check out my edited chapter? It's a lot better and I want to know if I did ok. And be truthful please?D'ago 00:30, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

No prob, chu deserved it. Your story's really good~! Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  00:42, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, that was me not logged in (and this is still me not logged in XD)

I know. I appreciate the thought ^.^ Dafnne Daughter   of Poseidon  01:16, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Featured User
Congratulations on being the Featured User for March! You wowed us as a new user coming here and creating amazing stories! I'm sure ~Angel Wings~ will leave a message on your talk page soon for an interview!  SallyPerson /   Natalie Cole  02:29, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Congratulations~!!!! You're literally the first new user to become user of the month. (that's like, a BIG deal :D) Well, as Sally already told you....it's....INTERVIEW TIME!!! Here are the questions:

How long have you been on this wiki?

What do you love about this wiki?

Why did you join?

Any advice for new users?

You get to spend one day with one of the Percy Jackson characters (OCs included). Who do you pick, and why?

Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  02:33, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well, first you add one (or more) of your OCs to the OC list, and then you're in the group~! It's basically like writing a story with a group of people, and we take turns writing the chapters, but we discuss the plot and ideas together. Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  04:03, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

well, i think your fanfiction song is great^^ i also like pokemon and that theme song is the first 1 i heard .MikmakMelendez 13:29, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Minor Edits
I don't mean to be rude or anything, you can do whatever you want, but I'm really bothered by the fact that almost 100% of your edits are flagged as minor edits. Scrolling down your contributions page I'm assaulted by a billion bold m's and feel like my eyes are going to fall out! If you can, only use the minor edit when you're making "superficial changes" to an article. Like making "typographical corrections, formatting and presentational changes, rearrangement of text without modification of content, etc." See Help:Minor edit on Wikipedia for more specifications (policy regarding minor edits is, by default, the same on all wikis, unless explicity stated otherwise). Thanks, Matortheeternal 00:27, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

LOL. Well good luck. I'll update soon. -- λύνα σίλβερ 06:08, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

April Fools
I'm not involved with AF, but I would like to finish UtM. ODST! 04:35, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm fine with waiting or doing them side by side. Veni, Vidi, Incendit 10:25, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

check the prolouge PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:36, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

yea ok...i never put spaces after puctuation...i always forget PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:46, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

true...also sing the messages and what to do now?...my and your story? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:49, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

continue my story..please PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:57, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

do percy and the book characters appear in your(nolan's) time PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods

ok thx PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  15:09, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

in my first story you and moodle will e the 2 i pick to go on my quest PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  15:42, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

this story(where you find me) will end soon after camp and continue in the Prince of Time of series...i will meet you in this series...you will be one of my best friends along with moodle,ghost man and fedora....maybe later you can go on a quest with me PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:03, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

my fanfics are: PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:32, March 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * The Prince of The Sea(prequel...stops soon after i arrive at camp)
 * The Prince of Time (the collab)
 * The Prince of the Sea:Pert 2(not actual title)...i get a quest from my father....moodle,me.tsumi and maybe fedora and you are members...can you be a member

can i fix spelling mistakes in your stories PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:36, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

done PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

yea can you be a member of my quest in my 3rd fanfic PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:44, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

i coreccted all i found..mostly spelling like vile instead of vial and able instead of apple and erika's instead of Erika's PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  18:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

oh..************...it was another user on a diff wiki who told me i could edit his story....i am so sorry.................i thought it was you PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  20:47, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

thx PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  18:14, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

in my story your chapter starts as we approoach camp until I get claimed...thx PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  19:04, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

love the chapter btw...both that is(the one in my story and in fedora's. PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  19:07, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

stop when Chiron says the "hail Jordan son of ......" line pls PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  19:15, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

ok PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:13, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

nice chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:14, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

ok PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:37, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

where should i end the prince of sea chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:57, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

you write the capture the flag chapter...make me look cool and powerful please....also you could make me beat up the are's cabin....my character does not like them PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:04, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

both as well as my fists lol PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:06, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

make them insult me and then i trip off on them PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:06, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

started yet? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:20, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanks PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:27, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

hello

hello PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:49, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

loveky chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:56, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

i think the ares' members should attack me for revenge...what do you think PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:57, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

i respect your opinion PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:06, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

story or chapter ending? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:18, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

hello...the story ends soon....like in 2 chapters each PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:24, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

then a sequel in which i get a quest and then the klonos one PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:25, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

So did i but It kinda fit with the story we were doing and i did ask Guy. TheGhostMan May the Underworld protect your soul when you enter. 02:17, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

actually you(if you can)moodle(confirmed) maybe kari and def tsumi are quest members....which leaves a spot because fedora will not reach camp until after that...hmm...yea ok PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  11:12, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

read my chapter and see my gift........if you nedd me to pack items for the quest...tell me.....I well tell Kari to tell you guys to give me them in her chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  12:08, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

also courtney is now a member of the quest PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  12:43, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

gtg in 5-10 mins PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:36, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

how were they.....*jumps up and down in excitement* PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:39, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

pls answer PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:43, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

you there PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:44, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

i take it you are not.......see you 2morrow PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:48, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanks PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  18:19, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

the new series is next............it starts with a flashback and then i go on a quest PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  23:24, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

falshback then something like........and now my father had a quest for me and then he explains..................he might tell me to tell you my new gift and if you want you can tell me yours? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  23:27, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

i think that i have to get 5 items for my father in my quest........with which he will help make my gifts..............except i do not know why......what do you think PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  20:51, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

think The Prince of the sea could make the featured article? PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  14:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

ok PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  16:58, March 26, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) titles for the sequel
 * 2) any idea where fedora made up the rhymes
 * 3) PerseusJackson  -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Title:My Father Gives Me a Quest PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

My Father Gives Me A Gift PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas: The Quest for the Trident .............my father merges a trident to my sword as well as the whole ring to bag thing PerseusJackson  -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:31, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanks PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:40, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

why are we going to wisconsin? Courtney -Daughter of Water  01:34, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

that's our first stop. i think some of the other users had an IRC meeting and decided that. but i dont know why. thats what i needd to find out. cause they gave me the chapter where we leave for wisconsin and i have a blank space for why we are going there. i wasn't apart of any IRC meetings so i dont know whats going on. Courtney -Daughter of Water  01:39, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

go look at fedoras blog post with the prophecy for this quest and he gave me a basic run down of whats going on. Courtney -Daughter of Water  01:57, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I just wanted to say sorry..I cause somekind of hold up on the story...I saw your comment on the April's article.I was gone for four days,but I did manage to finish it the day I saw that it was my turn to write..on March 25(that was the day I got home)I saw your message asking me to write it was dated March 23 two days before.I also told fedora that I'm going for a while..maybe he didn't notice my message..so I'm sorry...Karikamiya 02:20, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

that's just normal you know.and it's not your fault...I just wanted to say sorry thats all...I love your stories by the way so action packed.What Anime does your dog picture belong?Karikamiya 02:31, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't watch that yet..Thanks for the Anime..I'm running out of things to watch..Have you watch D.N. Angel?It's really great.Karikamiya 02:44, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

well..don't worry ..I don't want to bother you anymore.Karikamiya 03:05, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Need Some Help?
Hey Darkcloud1111, I looked at the title of your new story and noticed that you were having trouble with your monster and chains. So I did some research and this is what I found that I thought would best suit it that is pure greek myth.

The chains from the early part of the Gods reign could be 'The Chains of Prometheus'. The same chains that tied Prometheus to that rock while the vulturer ate his liver every day until Heracles broke him free. I thought that they could be used.

And for your monster it was trickier, but there was one monster mentioned in greek myths that was NEVER killed or fought by any hero: the Amphisbaena, the Monster with a dragons body, a snake for a head and another snake for a tail. It was said to have been born when Perseus dropped a lake of Medusa's blood when he was passing over Libya, the blood was then fused with a passing cobra which then mutated into the beast. No hero has ever faced it but it can still be a major threat.

So here is some idea you can use for your story if you consider it, if not, good luck with the fourth Nolan Swift adventure. AdamantiumBladez.

Hmm, looks like you could use this idea more than I can. I had thought of a created monster made of Greek Fire and Stygian Iron known as 'Λειωμένος'/'Leiomenos' (Lee-oh-men-os: greek Molten). If you needed a creature of pure evil, you've got it: created by the Telekhines to be a creature stronger than Typhon himself.

This was going to be my most diabolical creation to use, and I want you to use it. Nolan Swift is going to be more than Quick to beat it. Use it well for me alright. AdamantiumBladez.

P.S. If you are stumped about what it looks like, try making a fusion of the Balrog from Lord of the Rings and the Dragon from Beowulf. AdamantiumBladez.

I took a look at your 1st 2 chapters and I'm looking forward to the whole story. Thanks for also giving me some credit for 'Leiomenos'. Use him to your advantage. AdamantiumBladez.

Well, it seems like MattShadow is an admin, and he recently introduced a rule in which Admins must edit or blog comment at least once a week, and he's about as active as a dead dungbeetle. (And he's banned some really good users recently, as well, I'd advise not using chat for a quite a while) ODST! 02:34, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

'That admin' was Matt. And the hypocrisy I'm talking about was that the very person who edited those rules hacked into the server in order to gain admin status, and yet was not punished. Oh, the irony. Follow Your  Heart  ~♥~  02:43, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he claims under the reasoning that they broke a rule. He put the rules from this site onto the chat site we have. And they supposedly broke them. Odds are they didn't even see the post. If this doesn't get resolved soon, I'm going to the wikia staff. ODST! 02:43, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Timeline
Your story takes place between "The Last Olympian" and "The Lost Hero" right? so unless you plan on killing him off, its possible that he may be alive during my stories timeline....just sayin :D &quot;Beware the Jabberwokk my son; The jaws that bite, the claws that scratch.&quot; 04:40, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I see you used that idea you gave me. It's a good one. I'm following that book defidently. :D -❤PiperMclean 12:16, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Good luck! I'm sure you'll come up with a great idea. -❤Ivy, Daughter of Apollo ( PiperMclean ) 13:32, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

chapter's done. sorry it took so long. i didn't know about wisconsin so i just ended up making up something. Courtney -Daughter of   Water  17:29, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was wondering what you thought about the writing style I am using for Book 3 of my story? &quot;Beware the Jabberwokk my son; The jaws that bite, the claws that scratch.&quot; 17:53, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

two more !
wew. hey there. added 2 more chaps on LS - DOA. hope u'd enjoy. i wanna gettin gbored and was doing nothing, hope these chaps can read ur expectations and fulfill ur desires (just kidding, watching sitcoms right now) :D

anyways, pls read and enjoy ! ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя  badɛ [♥] wιɛяdgιяℓ  14:05, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Book One: Done, Book Two, Need To Do
Hey I have finished my first book, and now I am beginning my second one. I hope you like it and will look forward to the finished second book.

It's not finished. Guywithafedora, The Voice of Reason in Any Argument 21:55, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Forums
Feel free to edit the forums! Thanks for volunteering. 12:37, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

ello PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  20:35, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

i loved it...............but mine will be better PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  20:37, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

hopefully PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  20:39, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

oh.......ummmmmm...........it will be better but not as epic?......i meant the next chapter that i can have a real fight PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  21:47, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I was looking at a different part of my talk page. Whoops! You can still edit the forums though.  SallyPerson /   Natalie Cole  23:41, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

do you know what we are doing and where we are going now? and if you do know, why are we going there? i don't think courtney can just dream us around the country. please answer. i'm lost. Courtney -Daughter of   Water  02:56, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

TheGhostMan suggested that we could go to wisconsin and meet bray there. but there was no lead there so i created the dream. Courtney -Daughter of   Water  03:38, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Stories
I have read Fastest Hero Alive, The Lost Quiver, and what there is so far of The Chains That Blind. I love them all and encourage you to keep writing. I lost my account as Lazarus7 17:25, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Not a problem, it's your story, and you hold all the rights. If you don't like my edit and you want to change it I will not be offended at all - It's your material. I'm just trying to provide helpful suggestions. If you want, instead of editing it, I can just point out grammatical errors on talk pages. Artemisgirl 17:35, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

As long as you're ok with it : the moment you stop being ok with it you tell me, Ok? Artemisgirl 17:41, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, u cannot nominate urself. Hermione6720

well what's Nolan's nickname? Tick Tock-Feed the Croc 19:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Why would Nolan be close to you? Is your first name actually Nolan? Tick Tock-Feed the Croc 20:07, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

What is wrong with MissKitty The Spirit of the Oracle of Delphi is not a proper name it's a title of an immortal being. Tick Tock-Feed the Croc 20:28, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Tell me!
Where did you make your character photos?

~The Wise One ;D &quot;Nuff Said.&quot; 22:00, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

hey darkcloud, If ever my turn in the Prince of Time come in the next 5 days I ouldn't be able to rite because I'll be having a vacation ith my family.So don't be angry or anything if I cause a hold up or something.......Vega- don&#39;t you dare call me Adeline 03:24, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Just sayin'
Hi, Nolan. Nice fanfiction series. Love it. Congratulations on being the writer of the month. Hope to be friends. Storm

How is it that you know every message I send out? But thx anyway.

Justin Chen 20:37, April 24, 2011 (UTC)Raze1

CAn you read my first chapter(Not Finished). It's called:Chapter 1:The Best Daydream Ever?Justin Chen 21:04, April 24, 2011 (UTC)Raze1

Thx

98.219.43.95 00:10, April 25, 2011 (UTC)Raze1

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Thanks man.You won't regret it!!!!!!!!goddess of evil 21:32, April 30, 2011 (UTC)goddess of evil

yeah
i forget there names I think it was Megan Snow,and the other one's i forget their names sorry.But it's all the other ones!goddess of evil 21:52, April 30, 2011 (UTC)goddess of evil

Characters in your series
So I just finished reading your prequal and the first quest to save Megan...where did you get your ideas for the characters?

The Awesome X!-HOWDY! Talk

And, this is the same person-how did you find out what god parent was yours? Did you take a quiz or did you just make it up...?

HEY! I like to run, too!

i was wondering if you could review some of my characters at the link below

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sorry i didnt give you the complete character list hold on for a sec

Template help
hey Darkcloud1111 i was wondering if you know how to put a picture on the character templete i,d apreciate if you could helpSparx12 06:46, June 18, 2011 (UTC)sparx12

sure. i guess :)     ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя iƨ α wιɛяdgιяl  [ bαdɛ iƨ bɛck+jαdɛ ♥]  15:35, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Wass up
Hey, wass up? Just joined the site and I dig your Nolan Swift series, its quite amazing.

CrossJHero 19:57, June 20, 2011 (UTC)