Talk:Beauty and the Treat/@comment-24680515-20130519200947

Okay, firstly, I liked how you had Aphrodite leave her the notes and stuff. But, for every nice thing, there comes a price! Such as, why would Aphrodite give her 500,000 dollars over all of her other children? Is it because of favortism or what?

Second thing I liked: how you managed to get a bit descriptive with the chapter. But, like I said, for every nice thing, there comes a price. There were certain parts in here that went from first person to third person and I got a bit confused.

Lastly, you made Aphrodite enter the chapter at just the right time. It seemed kinda cool how she gave Sasha all those cool things. This last flaw is a bit minor, so you can ignore this. There were just a few grammar errors.

Overrall, you did just fine with this.