Talk:The Prince of Time:Chapter 10

Good chapter, but I have a few comments. The Dragon thing kind of just came out of left field. I mean Courtney had this dream about us being attacked, Fedora got us to the place the dream happened, and I kind of just brought in the enemy and the fact that there were strong forces working against us. Then, A dragon pops up out of nowhere and is done just as quickly. Darkcloud1111 ~Fastest Hero Alive  22:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)