Talk:Days of Boom: Chapter 9

Wow...Please don't take this the wrong way but downplay your character a little bit. Your character is quickly becoming massively overpowered, which means that someone reading about him will feel no sense of danger when he is in a fight. You can write about strong characters without making them seem so powerful they don't even need a team, you just need to find the right balance. Darkcloud1111 ~Fastest Hero Alive  16:42, July 4, 2012 (UTC)