Talk:Under a Very Black Sky/@comment-1755931-20150714015142/@comment-1755931-20150715135208

(Okaymyspacebarisn'tworking,bearwithme)

I'm-not-very-happy-with-how-Michael-went-out,epsecially-compared-to-Kat-,and-here's-why.

The-argument-between-Michael-and-Rachel-seemed-completely-inorganic,-with-no-setup-,especially-since-he-had-gotten-along-so-well-with-everyone-else-unti-lit-was-time-for-you-to-kill-more-people-off.Also-I-remember-back-when-you-were-starting-number-one-I-reminded-you-that-no-version-of-ichael-would-kill-anyone-ever-and-you-promised-to-maintain-that-aspect-of-him.

Otherwise-this-was-still-good,though-I-am-no-longer-emotionally-invested.