Talk:Markus Williams/@comment-6068707-20130619215850

I like your character. What I'm seeing here opens up for the best fight of all times. You could rewind and fastforward the fight so much that the fight has to be grewsome, titanic and could be one of the best fights in the entire story. I would really like reading about how his powers work. And more about him not realizing he had two moms? I mean does his mom become his dad? Or what?

Anyways keep it up and I can't wait to read your story.