User blog comment:ArchieScotts/Book Club Session 1/@comment-4464892-20150515112126

This review is based on the first 9 Chapters.

The Nolan Swift series is just like your common Original Character Fanfic, the author started with the main character experiencing the supernatural for the very first time inside his school and meeting strangers. There was really nothing special that will pull you in to the story.

I also have a problem with one character, Karena Diamante. Seeing as Karena isn't really the author's character I felt like she wasn't used well. I rather that the story goes on without her. There were momments that I wished she'll just drop dead right there.

As much as I really like the characters Megan and Nolan they weren't able to get out of the "cliche characters" zone. They were your demigod with demigod problems.

In my opnion, I feel like the prequel didn't do justice to the original story, "Nolan Swift: Fastest Hero Alive" Fastest Hero Alive was one of the stories that I used to follow every week, and My Story Begins kinda ruined the nostalgia feeling that I was supposed to have.

Overall I give the first 9 chapters a 6/10.

We are the Black Knights _We exist to protect the world   11:21, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

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