Talk:Chapter One of Doom/@comment-3337043-20130614034832

Alright Dark, this chapter was pretty good. It was intriguing and the plot seems pretty interesting, it makes me want to read more. The only problem was is that you're setting isn't very developed, I mean all I got was a group of people watching a tv, I had no idea where they were, what their relationships were to eachother, etc. If you feel that isn't important, than that's fine, but otherwise it was a pretty cool way to start a story.

8/10