Talk:Ghosts and Ghostly Things/@comment-5636540-20130414235139

The story was actually quite entertaining and kept my interest. It was well done for a one-shot and the description and detail wasn't overdone, but it would be better if you added a few more things. The grammar at some points needs work but I did like how you introduced us from Melinoe's point of view. Minor gods are never written about and this was a good thing to introduce them with. All in all I liked it, especially your addition of Charon.