User blog:LolitaGoth/Sneak Peek of Memories

Okay, I can't take it anymore. I just finished the first five chapters. I wanted to post the first paragraph of the first chapter though.

Chapter One
I wake up. I am guessing Luke’s men knocked me out. Maybe. I had the weirdest dream. About Vampyres. That was just weird. I rub my eyes, hopelessly trying to see through the dark. I didn’t know where I was. Someone helped me up. “Why hello, Cayla.” A voice said. This voice sounded too damn familiar. Ugh, Now I knew who it was. Shane Smith. My half-brother from Apollo cabin. “Shane?” I say weakly. “Shane?”

“Yes, Cayla. You guessed right.” A second voice said. This one I remembered from Hermes’ cabin when I was there. But this voice I couldn’t put a name to. Damn, who was it? “Who is that!?” I say. The second voice and Shane laugh,

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What do you think? Comment bellow! P.S. My friend and I are writing this one togeather. And my friend is a high school english teacher