Talk:The Genesis League: Ch. 2/@comment-4836994-20130414040631

>_< Hey SoZ. I really don't mean to burst your bubble, but it seems you forgot...Remember I told you that everyone already KNEW they were demigods? You can keep most of your story! :) I like the twist with how you made Bryce and Logan's story play out. Keep all that, it's fine. But I'd like you to make the other people know that they are demigods. It's easier for everyone to write, ya know? Like, for example, Bryce and Logan are the only one's who don't know of their heritage? All you need to do is re-write the beggining...if that's fine? :)  Just make it to where only Bryce and Logan are surprised? And everyone else can confess how they've been trying to hide their demigod statuses for years and they expose who their godly parent is? :)