Talk:Nolan Swift: Fastest Hero Alive Chapter List

Dude...
Dude...like seriously, you've got writing talent. And I'm not just saying that. This fan fiction story (the prequal) was really awesome. It made me keep reading, until the end, and then I was like, "No WAY! NO!" I wanted it to be even longer and stuff, and I wanted it to continue...wow! I marked it as 5 stars, however. I went to this page when i got to the end of the prequal, and was like, "DUDE! There's MORE!!! OHH...I AM SO TOTALLY STAYING UP AND READING THESE!!!" So, yeah, great job!

I couldn't help but notice that your writing style is very similar to mine...I enjoy writing fanfics and stuff, and I think that I'm pretty good at fight scenes. I'll be coming out with my own soon...I'm on chapter 3 in mine.

My only advice would be to draw the ending out more, and describe Camp Half-Blood more, because readers that haven't read the P. Jackson series wouldn't know what the crap the camp was like. They'd be lost. Also, make the ending longer...it came to an end a bit too quickly...

Also, I was kinda wondering why you wouldn't have been shocked to here that the gods were real and the monsters were real too...:)

Great job otherwise!!!

The Awesome X! 04:43, May 28, 2011 (UTC)