Talk:The Questers: Unbroken/@comment-1452857-20130512231115

First of all it's another tQ story, so that's awesome. Now for an actual review.

The violence can be a bit much as times, but it's part of the story's setting so that's fine. I like the whole gladiator aspect; it adds a creative dimension to the story. In certain parts it gets confusing, and the pacing can be a little fast, but the characterization of the characters makes up for that. I like how you've added in your own OCs as opposed to having just tQ. I like the romance, especially the Scott/Natalie moments :P

All in all it's an awesome story as usual.