Talk:Chapter one of The Twin Seas - Just Another Day

This is pretty good! It does sound like The Lightning Theif, but that's ok because this is a fan fiction site! Actually, my story kind of sounds like The Lightning Theif too. You still have a chance to make it more original, so don't change it! I do have one thing to suggest: capitalize the first letter of the first word inside quotations! It's how things are supposed to be written! Otherwise, the rest of it is good! Keep up the writing! I am the Daughter of Poseidon. Isn’t that awesome?! 22:35, November 1, 2011 (UTC)