User blog comment:ArchieScotts/Book Club Session 1/@comment-3389778-20150519125818

Oh right. I was supposed to put my own thoughts too. *ahem*

Like Lou said, it's pretty much the standard sphlell for someone who just started writing fanfiction. (Which is sad as I'm pretty sure this was written after the main story was written and Fastest Hero Alive was pretty good/meh as far as fanfiction goes)

It's a nice to have Nolan asks for his own weapon though, instead of just the usual 'gift from godly parent' or 'a weapon that once belonged to a hero' or something or other. Gives Nolan a bit more character.