Talk:This Self-Inflicted Prison (Wiki Contest: March 2013)/@comment-3389778-20130325163548

This is a real review now:

First off, Awesome. The pace is pretty fast, though I guess it sets the post-apocalyptic mood of the story since they have to keep moving to survive. Char development is good, I wish this wasn't a one-shot though :L  I would liked to know about James's father.

All in all, Awesome. A good contender for winner of the contest. :D