Talk:Archie Grey and the Pearl of Atlantis/@comment-4464892-20150401111022

I love how you started the whole camp encounter. It's not trying hard to be complicated, it actually flows naturally. I have no idea why, but the spacing of the words and sentences almost stopped me from reading this. Thankfully I didn't stop. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep it up inferno999!