Talk:Born From The Hearth: Chapter 1/@comment-4464892-20140604052257

A well written chapter. It showcase Hestia very well it made her looked like a normal girl but at the same time as a goddess. I like the balance way of how you described your characters, Pierre, as someone who experience hardships, but not too much to the point that he felt surreal. And the way the two of them met sound so normal, not force.

Overall I'll give this chapter 9 out of 10. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Love, Ani