User blog comment:ArchieScotts/Book Club Session 1/@comment-8863386-20150519100947

Okay, I'll just make my review brief and simple.

I felt that this story was a bit of the "beginner's first fanfiction" kind of story. The basic strange and unnatural happenings, and then a monster attack, plain simple prophecy and just nothing out of the ordinary. I mean, the story's fine. Just not really my cup of tea. This story kinda pulled down the series, not a really good way to start the series. At least the succeeding stories did a pretty great job at making the series quite a legend.

I rate this 6/10.