User blog comment:Writergirl208/Tittle TBD... 1st chapter of story/@comment-2171390-20110105032914

Awesome, Just a little on the short side, you know? That's probably is just because it's just the first chapter, but other then that....Pretty good. I seen literally no spelling, punctuation, or grammar flaws at all. Which is saying a lot coming from me because I'm a "Stickler" at those things. But I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Bye!