Talk:Shadow Lives

Wow, this was incredible! Perhaps a bit too much description in the beginning (try to use less concrete imagery and incorporate it in other ways than just saying it straight out) but other than that i would totally vote this as the best! More people should read this story! It's the perfect combination of preexisting Percy Jackson novels with new, creative ideas!

Michaelamangos 12:16, July 24, 2010 (UTC)