Talk:Luke Vapor

Dago's Review
Rating: 9/10

Good: All of the grammar and spelling is correct, the majority of the info is filled out. He isn't Op, has a good ammount of powers and the personality and appearance is good. All of the links are efficient, and the gallery was a nice touch.

Bad: There were some spots that had a place for info, but there was nothing written. I didn;t see any grammar problems. :D

Advice: Maybe put a title sentence on the top saying: Luke Vapor is a son of Helios, or something like that. Also add in the appearnaces that he is in The White Knights Collab and anything else he is in. In history, finish The White Knights and for spoilers, I'd say remove Camp Jupiter. Otherwise, you're good!

OM NOM NOM! - Dago!  19:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)