User talk:Darkcloud1111

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Percy Jackson Fanfiction Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the Nolan Swift: Fastest Hero Alive page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Kakki10 (Talk) 22:51, February 9, 2011

Your story
Yeah! It's really great and is definitely on the right track. Keep it up! I can't wait to see how it turns out.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  01:16, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your story is great! I absolutely love it.  SallyPerson /   Natalie Cole  02:06, February 10, 2011 (UTC)



Luna Silver: Daughter of Artemis -- Update.
Hi. I updated my Fan Fic. If you have time. Please have a read. Thanks !

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 11:34, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Link: Luna Silver: Daughter of Artemis

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 11:34, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nolan Swift: Fastest Hero Alive
Nice story (honestly and really), feel bad for Megan, and write who's point of view, and yes I'm writing this in a hurry.

Moodle "You have poured so many memories into me. Given me so much... That I feel like I'm about to overflow. Look at me Roxas, who do you see?" - Xion speaking to Roxas, Kingdom Hearts 358/2 days 20:11, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey!
You're here again! Read my 50 Ways to Annoy Ares "story".

Moodle "You have poured so many memories into me. Given me so much... That I feel like I'm about to overflow. Look at me Roxas, who do you see?" - Xion speaking to Roxas, Kingdom Hearts 358/2 days 21:35, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your Story
Ah-mah-zing :D

LOL. I'm on syllables today. Anyways. that was great. two bad Malcolm and Erika might die or something.

Anyhow, tell me when you update, 'kay?

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 12:04, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

P.S ~ Have you read my story ? Can I have your feedback ?

LOL. No wonder -- thanks for the info. I'll refrain from using Tab. Thanks :D

I'll be updating soon.

ℓʋиα ƨιℓvɛя 02:13, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Your story
Wow. I'm amazed. Grammatically, it seems as if everything is in order. That's always a plus. Also, most importantly, it's amazingly creative! You manage to fit in a lot of action without it being unrealistic. Also, all your ideas are your own and they're great! I wish I had thought of them. Haha. Wow. I love it.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  15:00, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. I love the ending. I can't wait to see another story from you! I hope an idea comes to you soon!  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  22:57, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. Those both sound great.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  01:09, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Great job so far.  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  01:16, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Chu can choose from Naomi, Karena, and Demetra :3 Dafnne Daughter   of Poseidon  01:19, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

K. Can't wait~! Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  01:50, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Nice job. It's great. I love how you pulled in Arachne. I don't think I've seen any other story with her in it. Anyway, amazing!  Kakki10 -   Kassi   Banoight  16:18, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, thank chu for using my character XDDD It's amazing how chu can keep turning out the chapters so fast :3 Dafnne Daughter   of Poseidon  18:29, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Dude, if I could do that, I wouldn't have any unfinished stories right now XDD You've really got talent, you know. Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  18:38, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey can you check out my edited chapter? It's a lot better and I want to know if I did ok. And be truthful please?D'ago 00:30, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

No prob, chu deserved it. Your story's really good~! Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  00:42, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, that was me not logged in (and this is still me not logged in XD)

I know. I appreciate the thought ^.^ Dafnne Daughter   of Poseidon  01:16, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Featured User
Congratulations on being the Featured User for March! You wowed us as a new user coming here and creating amazing stories! I'm sure ~Angel Wings~ will leave a message on your talk page soon for an interview!  SallyPerson /   Natalie Cole  02:29, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Congratulations~!!!! You're literally the first new user to become user of the month. (that's like, a BIG deal :D) Well, as Sally already told you....it's....INTERVIEW TIME!!! Here are the questions:

How long have you been on this wiki?

What do you love about this wiki?

Why did you join?

Any advice for new users?

You get to spend one day with one of the Percy Jackson characters (OCs included). Who do you pick, and why?

Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  02:33, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well, first you add one (or more) of your OCs to the OC list, and then you're in the group~! It's basically like writing a story with a group of people, and we take turns writing the chapters, but we discuss the plot and ideas together. Dafnne Daughter  of Poseidon  04:03, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

well, i think your fanfiction song is great^^ i also like pokemon and that theme song is the first 1 i heard .MikmakMelendez 13:29, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Minor Edits
I don't mean to be rude or anything, you can do whatever you want, but I'm really bothered by the fact that almost 100% of your edits are flagged as minor edits. Scrolling down your contributions page I'm assaulted by a billion bold m's and feel like my eyes are going to fall out! If you can, only use the minor edit when you're making "superficial changes" to an article. Like making "typographical corrections, formatting and presentational changes, rearrangement of text without modification of content, etc." See Help:Minor edit on Wikipedia for more specifications (policy regarding minor edits is, by default, the same on all wikis, unless explicity stated otherwise). Thanks, Matortheeternal 00:27, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

LOL. Well good luck. I'll update soon. -- λύνα σίλβερ 06:08, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

April Fools
I'm not involved with AF, but I would like to finish UtM. ODST! 04:35, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm fine with waiting or doing them side by side. Veni, Vidi, Incendit 10:25, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

check the prolouge PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:36, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

yea ok...i never put spaces after puctuation...i always forget PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:46, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

true...also sing the messages and what to do now?...my and your story? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:49, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

continue my story..please PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  14:57, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

do percy and the book characters appear in your(nolan's) time PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods

ok thx PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  15:09, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

in my first story you and moodle will e the 2 i pick to go on my quest PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  15:42, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

this story(where you find me) will end soon after camp and continue in the Prince of Time of series...i will meet you in this series...you will be one of my best friends along with moodle,ghost man and fedora....maybe later you can go on a quest with me PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:03, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

my fanfics are: PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:32, March 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * The Prince of The Sea(prequel...stops soon after i arrive at camp)
 * The Prince of Time (the collab)
 * The Prince of the Sea:Pert 2(not actual title)...i get a quest from my father....moodle,me.tsumi and maybe fedora and you are members...can you be a member

can i fix spelling mistakes in your stories PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:36, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

done PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

yea can you be a member of my quest in my 3rd fanfic PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  16:44, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

i coreccted all i found..mostly spelling like vile instead of vial and able instead of apple and erika's instead of Erika's PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  18:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

oh..************...it was another user on a diff wiki who told me i could edit his story....i am so sorry.................i thought it was you PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  20:47, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

thx PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  18:14, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

in my story your chapter starts as we approoach camp until I get claimed...thx PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  19:04, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

love the chapter btw...both that is(the one in my story and in fedora's. PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  19:07, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

stop when Chiron says the "hail Jordan son of ......" line pls PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  19:15, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

ok PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:13, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

nice chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:14, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

ok PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:37, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

where should i end the prince of sea chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  21:57, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

you write the capture the flag chapter...make me look cool and powerful please....also you could make me beat up the are's cabin....my character does not like them PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:04, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

both as well as my fists lol PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:06, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

make them insult me and then i trip off on them PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:06, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

started yet? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:20, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanks PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:27, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

hello

hello PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  22:49, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

loveky chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:56, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

i think the ares' members should attack me for revenge...what do you think PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:57, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

i respect your opinion PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:06, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

story or chapter ending? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:18, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

hello...the story ends soon....like in 2 chapters each PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:24, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

then a sequel in which i get a quest and then the klonos one PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  01:25, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

So did i but It kinda fit with the story we were doing and i did ask Guy. TheGhostMan May the Underworld protect your soul when you enter. 02:17, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

actually you(if you can)moodle(confirmed) maybe kari and def tsumi are quest members....which leaves a spot because fedora will not reach camp until after that...hmm...yea ok PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  11:12, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

read my chapter and see my gift........if you nedd me to pack items for the quest...tell me.....I well tell Kari to tell you guys to give me them in her chapter PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  12:08, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

also courtney is now a member of the quest PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  12:43, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

gtg in 5-10 mins PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:36, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

how were they.....*jumps up and down in excitement* PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:39, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

pls answer PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:43, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

you there PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:44, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

i take it you are not.......see you 2morrow PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  00:48, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanks PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  18:19, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

the new series is next............it starts with a flashback and then i go on a quest PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  23:24, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

falshback then something like........and now my father had a quest for me and then he explains..................he might tell me to tell you my new gift and if you want you can tell me yours? PerseusJackson -Leader and Protector of all Demigods  23:27, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

i think that i have to get 5 items for my father in my quest........with which he will help make my gifts..............except i do not know why......what do you think PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  20:51, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

think The Prince of the sea could make the featured article? PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  14:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

ok PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  16:58, March 26, 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) titles for the sequel
 * 2) any idea where fedora made up the rhymes
 * 3) PerseusJackson  -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Title:My Father Gives Me a Quest PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

My Father Gives Me A Gift PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas: The Quest for the Trident .............my father merges a trident to my sword as well as the whole ring to bag thing PerseusJackson  -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:31, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanks PerseusJackson -Jordan Terraemotus Tempestas  19:40, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

why are we going to wisconsin? Courtney -Daughter of Water  01:34, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

that's our first stop. i think some of the other users had an IRC meeting and decided that. but i dont know why. thats what i needd to find out. cause they gave me the chapter where we leave for wisconsin and i have a blank space for why we are going there. i wasn't apart of any IRC meetings so i dont know whats going on. Courtney -Daughter of Water  01:39, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

go look at fedoras blog post with the prophecy for this quest and he gave me a basic run down of whats going on. Courtney -Daughter of Water  01:57, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I just wanted to say sorry..I cause somekind of hold up on the story...I saw your comment on the April's article.I was gone for four days,but I did manage to finish it the day I saw that it was my turn to write..on March 25(that was the day I got home)I saw your message asking me to write it was dated March 23 two days before.I also told fedora that I'm going for a while..maybe he didn't notice my message..so I'm sorry...Karikamiya 02:20, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

that's just normal you know.and it's not your fault...I just wanted to say sorry thats all...I love your stories by the way so action packed.What Anime does your dog picture belong?Karikamiya 02:31, March 29, 2011 (UTC)