Talk:The Adventures of Alex Danielson 1

I just wanted to tell you that every time a different person talks, they get their own paragraph. If you put them all into one paragraph it can be confusing. Please, don't think I'm trying to be mean, that's just proper grammar. The story is good so far, though. :D Kyra   Daughter of   Apollo  04:55, May 21, 2010 (UTC)