This was a pretty good chapter too. Sorry for commenting on all of your chapters! It's just that you are the only one who is editing right now~!!! Oh, and each chapter seems a bit on the shorter side... That's probably just me though, I'm used to reading and writing super long chapters. Yours Truely, Aosh Hatchi
Thanks.... again! It's okay if you keep commenting on my chapters. I'm bored so I decided to post all of what I wrote this weekend. This chapter probably is shorter than the other ones. Then again, my first one was really long since it was a short story by itself originally. I am hoping to start making my chapters longer (excluding the fifth one). Daughter of Poseidon118 02:25, September 12, 2011 (UTC)